If this was the author's first book, I would like to congratulate her. It took a lot of time to sit and write. However, there are things that could be improved upon in future writings. There were not many twists to the plot and a subplot was missing. It was apparent from the beginning that Torry was a lady's man; it could have been a little bit more subtle for the reader so that when introduced that he was cheating, it would have held the reader's attention. The other thing was life came too easily for Andi - seriously, who paints for art shows after only taking one art class in college? Aside from that, I did like how she started over with her life at the end of the book; that was a classic fairy tale.
If this was the author's first book, I would like to congratulate her. It took a lot of time to sit and write. However, there are things that could be improved upon in future writings. There were not many twists to the plot and a subplot was missing. It was apparent from the beginning that Torry was a lady's man; it could have been a little bit more subtle for the reader so that when introduced that he was cheating, it would have held the reader's attention. The other thing was life came too easily for Andi - seriously, who paints for art shows after only taking one art class in college? Aside from that, I did like how she started over with her life at the end of the book; that was a classic fairy tale.
by on October 25, 2011 at 10:09:04 PM